In an earlier time, in a different life, only weeks but eons ago, Jonas had hesitated for a long time when he saw his first Gate open before he followed the Wanderer in to the other Side. Now he hesitated only long enough to gather five good throwing-sized stones. He stored three in his pockets, carrying one in each hand, then leapt nimbly up the mound, his bare calloused island feet hardly protesting, and waded into the warm red glow of the Gate, and out of this world.
Two moons. The shock paralyzed him for a moment before he surveyed his new environment. There were two of them, one large, pale blue, white at the poles like a small planet. The other a sickly yellow-orange, the color of cut apples left uneaten. In their combined glow, eerie twilight shadows fell double from every object, like an old 70’s-style chintzy nightclub.
He stood on the glistening marble steps of a domed ruin, cracked like a dropped punch bowl, in a massive courtyard, the broken pillars of which gnashed the empty sky; images of gigantic winged serpents, eroded from age-old exposure to wind and rain, writhed in a contorted sinuous embrace of each column. Jonas sucked the damp air in between his teeth. Ages lay on this place in uncounted layers, but the marble of the pillars and dome twinkled in the icy glare of the twin moon half-night, undimmed by dust or time: unnatural, ethereal.
The steps led up to a black iron gate, a dark mouth opening in the ivory dome, and as Jonas drew near, he saw that it was made of metal serpents woven together, meshed by some long forgotten craft. Snake-headed handles glared at him with dark blue jewels set deep in the eye sockets. He dared not touch it; it seemed altogether loathsome to him for reasons he could not articulate, and he stopped, fearful of he knew not what, of myths undreamed, of nightmares unremembered.













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This is the first chapter of the second novel of my Hunter series, continuing just after the first book ends. I'll give you an excerpt from my query letter regarding the first:
"Sometimes it's better not to answer the doorbell; the path beyond could lead anywhere, anywhere at all...
Hunter: Recruitment is a completed fantasy novel, about 109,000 words, set in a contemporary tropical island.
Jonas Hunter's comfortable life is about to implode. From the moment he answers the door early one morning, his grasp on reality is shaken by discoveries for which his education and experience have left him woefully unprepared.
He discovers that the Fidelis corporation, where he heads the Pharmaceutical Research division, is a front for a covert and powerful paramilitary organization, and his co-workers are more than they appear - in particular the resident computer technician, Diane Krieger, whose stunning beauty and perfect manners mask a deadly secret...
Catapulted unwillingly into an age-long secret War of which he, and the world at large, are both ignorant, he has to take a side. Unfortunately, his impulsive choices only place himself and his friends in mortal peril from an elegantly evil and supremely powerful enemy, whom Jonas ultimately has to face alone, with new weapons and skills he has yet to master.
The novel explores the idea of 'spiritual warfare' in a markedly different manner from Peretti's This Present Darkness and Lahaye/Jenkin's Left Behind series, and owes much to my lifelong fascination with Tolkien, Lewis and Howard: it is fantasy, not theology. The warfare is physical, as are the weapons and armor...
Oh and happy...oops, never mind
you might just get me to read the novel after all
Thanks, dude...this is the second one tho, LOL
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